Hello, Roaring Witch!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I enjoyed reading your Irish tapestry poem.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary day and month! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.

I wondered if this was a form poem of some kind? The refrain especially made me wonder this, with it repeating three times.

I liked the idea of spinning for peace, and with this being an Irish tapestry poem, the green made particular sense to me.

I thought the green would look nice with the other threads of silver, blue, black and peridot.

Your rhyming was nice and made the poem feel more like an incantation or song, in addition to feeling poetic.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your Irish tapestry poem.

I thought the personal, philosophy and experience genres you selected were appropriate for this Irish tapestry poem of yours.



CONCLUSION:
I enjoyed reading your Irish tapestry poem.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler












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