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Greetings and welcome to writing.com!

Good grief, what a tale! I was at the edge of my seat, wondering what absurdity would ensue in such an inherently absurd situation. You write clearly and engagingly, and I don’t need to paste this into the QuillBot AI detector to see it is a fully human story. You have a voice which comes through well enough to make us wonder if this is in some part autobiographical.

One of my mentors always suggests giving the first person character a name somehow as quickly as possible within the story, but I was so caught up in the humble adventure I didn’t think about names or genders at all. Perhaps at the end you could throw in the name as they gaze happily at their license, but it’s not something important. I loved all the specific details, such as the names and locations, car models, and the way the driving test went.

There are a few random typos, such as quotation marks in the wrong place, but they didn’t interrupt the reading experience. I do recommend using Size 4 Verdana font to create a more open and accessible reading experience. Also including a word count is a good idea, because then you can enter this into some of the contests around here, such as "SENIOR CENTER FORUM" Open in new Window. or "Fox's Socks Newbie Short Story Contest" Open in new Window..

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*


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