Hello, Jay O'Toole!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I enjoyed reading your spiritual / inspirational / community poem about restoring America's beauty.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary day and month! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.

I popped over to your port, knowing it'd be easy to find something to review for you, as you're one of my favorite writers here. yet I was still surprised at how quickly I found this inspirational poem of yours. The tile caught my eye first, then the picture, then the two short sentences in this great description line: "True beauty starts at the heart in relationship to Jesus Christ. Life shines from here." So true! This reminds me of Elizabeth George's book, "Beautiful in God's Eyes." Though that was aimed at Christian women, versus the country of the United States of America.

I enjoyed your whole poem and will join you in prayer for revival and restoration of the beauty of our country. I'll pray for blessings on you, your writing, and your family too.

I loved that your thumbnail picture for this inspirational poem yours is perfect for the message of the poem. It added color too, and helped catch my eye. All good things in such an image.

My favorite sentence in your poem was these two lines:
"Your beauty starts, and ends, and lives
within the Grace of He."
Amen, brother!

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your inspirational poem.

I thought the genres you selected were perfect for this spiritual / community / inspirational poem of yours.

I wondered if this poem was entered in Sharmelle's "Poetry Topic of the Month Contest?" And if so, did it win? If so, I hope it did. I miss that contest. That reminds me to pray for Sharmelle. Your poem has inspired a bunch of prayers already!


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!


CONCLUSION:
I enjoyed reading and praying along with your poem about beautifying America spiritually.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, faith, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler












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