Hi Lee,

This is a wonderful story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering what the humans will do when they find out what the aliens have done with their home. In the story, humans realize that they have been taken from Earth by aliens and put into a computer-generated Earth. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)You have neglected to either double space or indent between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.

The story is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.