Hi William,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about a duck who is feeling less like part of the flock. I am hoping that this duck can find his place in the flock once again. I read to the last word to find out. The Prose Poetry poetic form works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.