Well, this looks like the start of an interesting story. A young lady, who loves the fantasy genre, finds an old book, and finds herself teleported to a strange world. Will she find her way home? Just wait and see to find out what will happen to her. I hope to see more myself.

Characters
The characters seem promising.

Spelling and Grammar
Spelling and grammar looks alright.

Suggestions
Might want to include a ling to the main story, when it's posted.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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