Hello, Max, aka mathguy!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I love how you set up your goals.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I see this habit goal chart every day at Habit Heroes and admire it, but never thought about reviewing it until I saw that someone else did. I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.

Your habit goal chart is amazing! And, even more, YOU are amazing, keeping up with all of these habits so consistently! Some of them are tough too. At least they'd be tough for me. You consistently stay within your calorie allotment, go to bed on time, get up on time, weigh yourself, and do positive things for your health and others' well being too.

Your use of vibrant colors is attention getting.

I loved how you separated your daily habits from your weekly habits in your habit goal chart. It's easy to see at a glance how you're doing in every area too. I suspect that you're actually doing better than you give yourself credit for on the weekly goals. You have very high standards though, and I applaud that. So many people have standards that are too low, but this is about you, not them. YOU are doing great!

I forget your total weight loss to date number, but I do remember that I was mightily impressed by it. Losing that much weight and keeping it off is an amazing accomplishment. If you are interested, and it still exists, I think you qualify to participate in the National Weight Loss Registry. I forget their exact requirements... something like having lost 10 lbs or more and kept it off for at least six months? I read a book written by someone high up in the organization a long time ago and it was really interesting. They track successful weight loss achievers and investigate what they have in common and what behaviors are most strongly tied with long-lasting weight loss success. You already have what it takes, for sure. Your experiences might help others and science too.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your habit goal chart.



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!

The only change I'd make has nothing to do with your writing or goals. It'd be to change your "other" genre to something like "inspirational," and to add "personal" and "experience" as additional genres. That's only if you're interested in gaining more eyeballs on this though. If you don't care about that, leaving "other" works fine.



CONCLUSION:

I enjoyed reading your habit goal chart in more depth than usual today.

Thank you for sharing your amazing habit goals and successes with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings, great health, and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler












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