Hi Sox and Sandals,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about someone who wants to get to know someone who seems to above them. I try to get to know everyone I like. I don't see the difference in their station in life. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with flow of this poem. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.