Hi Kenzie,

This is a fantastic article. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the article is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read right away to find out more. You introduce the topic by asking the reader some pointed questions about what they remember from their youth. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the article. They will read to the last word. You have written about what people usually remember most about their youth. You have done your research. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.