Hello, Dan I Am / mordee2!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I enjoyed reading your comical short story about rural life and the birds.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month and day! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.

Your story impressed me enough that I fanned you. I wondered if it was fiction or real life? It felt real, so if it was fiction, you made it come to life realistically.

I loved the full circle thing with the pigeons in your story.

I loved the description of the lovely morning on the farm and the filling breakfast. That was the only thing that made me think it could be fiction though. Most of the farmers I have known tend to feed their animals before they feed themselves.

You made me want some fresh berries.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your story.

I thought the comedy and nature genres you selected were perfect for this farm story of yours.

I wondered if you won the contest in which you entered this item? And I wondered which contest it was entered in. I hope you did win.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!


CONCLUSION:
I enjoyed reading your funny farm story.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, humor, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler












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A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" 




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .