This looks like the start of an interesting play. A young woman, reading on a bench at the park, meets up with a young man. The pair begin to talk, sharing mutual interests. This talk seems to last all, if not most of, the day. When they leave, it's clear that they want to meat again.

Characters
Characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You might want to use Bold for the names and Italics for emotions and such.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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