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The Long & Winding Moo  [13+]
Introduction to Me & My Portfolio
by ♥OctOGRE tHiNg♥
Review by JACE
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi ♥OctOGRE tHiNg♥ .

I'm JACE , and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "The Long & Winding Moo" .

I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.

*Note1*  Overall Impression. First, congratulations as you approach your 23rd Writing.Com Anniversary. That is no small feat. My 23rd won't happen until 2031. I hope to still be here then. Thank you for all the support and encouragement you've given to the members and the site over all these years, and I wish you great success on your continuing writing journey.

With all that in mind how could I not search for a more personal item in your Port. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this humble offering. It looks like you've had a storied (pun intended) journey as you've embraced this site.

Great job keeping it updated. This biography obviously means a lot to you. So many members don't take the opportunity to go back to older pieces. This item alone has garnered you almost 5000 views. A quick search of my own Port shows only one item with 1500 views. And you've only had 50% more years here.

I found your journey through the years here fascinating. You've seen and enjoyed so many things as WDC has grown through the years. (Personally, I've always envied the early members who were able to attend the conventions in the early years and meet the founders and other members. For myself, I don't often take the time to get to know our older members as I should. I think you guys intimidate me a little. *Rolleyes*)

Thank you for sharing yourself with us.

*Exclaim*  Technical and Editorial Considerations. I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing here--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc.

         *Bullet* For all the older readers out there, thank you for making your font size larger. I know I have trouble sometimes reading the default size, especially when folks don't double-space their paragraphs.   

         *Bullet* I like your use of the various WritingML links. It shows anyone reading your offering what they might do in their own works. And no links are broken--great job with the updates.   

*Thumbsup* Favorite Part. Your giving back to the community really impresses me.

*Star* My Rating.  5.0. 

*Heart* Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.

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Jace
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