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Renewal Open in new Window. [E]
The Earth Mother is rejuvenated
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Greetings, Nikola!

Ah, a perfect little nature poem, nicely balanced on the page and delicately written with few words. It paints a picture of peace and cool relief after the drought, with gentle personification that brings the scenery to life.

I love a good nature poem, and something brief and simple and elegant like this on the Random Read and Review button is especially nice to find.

As an amateur poet myself, I have little to suggest here. Perhaps you should add a line count and drop it off at the Shadows and Light or the First and Second Chance Poetry contests. They're always glad to have entries.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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