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Given: Sep 3, 2024 at 4:28pm
Length: 944 Characters |
868 w/o WritingML
Greetings!
A beautiful and heartfelt prayer for peace on earth. I love the simplicity and spirituality of it; I don't always find religious type items around here. My own faith could be better, but I know this is a universal prayer among humankind.
Perhaps a note explaining the Fibonacci poetic form would be helpful, as I see the care you've taken in the creation of this but I'm not exactly sure what the parameters were. Also, it seems as though the lines would appear more pleasing to the eye if the text was centered, but perhaps the left justification was a requirement of the format.
A line count would qualify this for submission to the Shadows and Light or the First and Second Chance Poetry contests. I think it's quite good enough for them. They're always happy to get more entries.
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