Hi Uninterupted Poet,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is tinged with curiosity and tension. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if these scientists are in danger from the orb. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a group of scientists who find an unusual orb and attempt to do tests on it. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.