Hi sapphire,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about someone who is fixated on what the eyes of others may hold. I think that we can learn a great deal about someone just by the expressions they hold their face in, and that includes their eyes. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.