Hi Tito,


This is a fantastic article. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the article. I have a particular medical condition which causes me to pay attention to the appearance of my urine, and I began to read immediately to find out more. You introduce the topic by telling the reader exactly what they will be getting out of the article. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the article. They will read to the last word. You have written about the different colors urine cab be and what these colors can mean to a person's health. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for the reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.