Hi sampras,


This is a fantastic piece. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the piece. I was very interested in your topic-unified families-and began to read right away to find out more. You launch into piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written a prayer asking God to watch over families and give them everything they need to remain close. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use an emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.