Hi robowriter,


This is a wonderful essay. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the essay. I don't know a lot about AI and began to read right away to find out more. You launch into the essay without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the essay. They will read to the last word. You have written about the reasons for anger about the use of AI in various industries, including writing. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make is comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the essay tedious. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)In a couple of places you have neglected to double space between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.

You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.