Hi AmyJo,


This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem welcomes Halloween and all the delightful creepiness that comes with it. I love Halloween almost as much as I love Christmas. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used the available words very creatively. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.