I did this contest last week. I found the prompt entertaining and inspiring, with so many cool directions it could be taken. This story is one of those cool directions. I thought about the you will miss me when I am gone direction. It is a funny one. I like that you made the voice of the virus female. Though you could have made that clearer earlier in the story. It gave me a giggle to think of the voice commenting on his male behaviors in a female voice but male mannerisms. You did not show that but it would have been funny. It also would have been funny if she gave him an overly cute pet name. I do have to say there is nothing harmless about a voice that talks incessantly not even allowing sleep. I guess there is no permanent harm. Is Vera the type of virus you can only catch once or might she come back? Is there only one infection that goes from person to person or is she one of a community of viruses? How is the virus transmitted? Okay those questions are not fair to you I did not answer them in my story either.

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