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 | Technology  [E] Poem about the future.  |
| (5.0)   HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"   Greetings, Itchybarn! I am reviewing this because I am part of the Anniversary Review Team, and you were on the list.  Happy 6th Account Anniversary! First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. The Positives/What I Liked Wow, this is impressive! A great poem! You definitely have a talent for writing poetry. And it makes perfect sense, too.   You hit on some great points and bring up advantages and disadvantages to technology. Growing technology is good in so many ways, I agree, but as you mentioned, some technology is taking jobs away. I'm retired, so while I'm not too worried for myself, I do have two daughters and six grandkids to think about.  I always say, however, things usually have a way of working out.  I think my favorite lines are the last two:And these new times? It's made people lazy. Doesn't it all seem just a little bit crazy? I can't help but agree! I've noticed this, too. It's crazy!  Suggestions/Comments to ConsiderYou might consider adding Technology as one of your genre choices. Final ThoughtsGreat job! And again, Happy 6th WdC Account Anniversary! A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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