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 | Our Way Back Home  [E] When dealing with the struggles of life, there are beacons ready and willing to guide us.  |
| Hello, MJones Transforming … Again ! This is a "Fox's Socks Newbie Poetry Contest" judge's review!  Overall Impression:You've created a simple but impactful poem with a strong spiritual message. Form, Rhythm, Cadence, and Style:You've chosen a clean and deliberate structure, and the use a parallelism creates a cadence the moves the poem forward. It gives the reader a feeling of agency in that they can walk along with the virtues in a spiritual journey. Free verse was a good choice for the reflective tone you've established. Content:I enjoyed how the concepts of compassion, gratitude, and courage are personified. The idea that these virtues can guide individuals to a higher state of being or harmonious existence is probably one most readers will acknowledge, even if their concept of each virtue varies slightly. Grammar and Mechanics:The poem is structurally sound and I found no grammatical errors. Final Thoughts:You've done a great job encouraging readers to embrace these virtues as an answer to life's challenges. Thank you for sharing your work with us! Jayne   My approach to reviews: "I'll Explain, but not Disclaim"
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