Hi Michelle,


This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of sadness and pain. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about your feelings after your mother passed away. I am so sorry for your loss. I hope you got all the love and support you deserved after this heart breaking event. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.