Hi william,


This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with adoration. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is completely taken and devoted to someone they are in love with. The reader is wondering if the relationship is really healthy or will lead to problems for the speaker. They will read to the last word. I loved this poem. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.