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 My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE ESSAYThis is a motivational essay that sets the tone for author's goals in 2022.  WHAT I LIKEDI liked the ending. HOOves was picking herself up by the cow hooves and plowing into 2022.  POV NARRATION/TENSEThis is written in the first person. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately. GOAL SETTING There's an assessment of 2021, which seemed like a tough year. I think it was for all of us. The goal for 2022 was wise up and be "me". It sounds easy, but I also know it's easy to get side tracked. I got the impression that 2022 was a recovery year from 2021. MECHANICSI did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font and make it easy on the eyes to read. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONSThe opening engages the reader using a conversational voice. The ending leaves the reader on an upbeat tone and reminds us all of something important. "Ya gotta be you."   HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM"Anniversary Reviews ~ Summer Break"  An Angel Army Review 
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