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 A Prayer to God Open in new Window. [E]
Thank you God
by WriterRick Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi WriterRick Author Icon.

I'm JACE Author Icon, and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "A Prayer to God" Open in new Window..

I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.

*Note1* Overall Impression. Good morning. I found your item on the Read & Review feature.

Your title sets the stage. While not a long piece, you provided a written record of the very thing many of us do verbally or silently at least once a day. There have been occasions where prayer several times a day is warranted, which I have felt myself.

The words of your prayer are the perfect way to begin a new day. I say this because of the timber of your words. They don't reflect the success of a completed day. You ask the Lord for His help to survive and thrive another day.

*Exclaim* Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc.

I found no issues with any technical aspect of your writing. Well done.

*Star* My Rating.  5.0. 

*Heart* Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.


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JACE

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