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 | A Prayer to God  [E] Thank you God  |
| (5.0)| An Angel Army Review Hi WriterRick . I'm JACE , and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "A Prayer to God" . I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.  Overall Impression. Good morning. I found your item on the Read & Review feature. Your title sets the stage. While not a long piece, you provided a written record of the very thing many of us do verbally or silently at least once a day. There have been occasions where prayer several times a day is warranted, which I have felt myself. The words of your prayer are the perfect way to begin a new day. I say this because of the timber of your words. They don't reflect the success of a completed day. You ask the Lord for His help to survive and thrive another day.  Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc.I found no issues with any technical aspect of your writing. Well done.  My Rating. 5.0.  Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.Reviewed by JACE    My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 09/14/2024 @ 10:28pm EDT