Hi dyxe0ri,


This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of devotion and love. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is deeply in love but unsure of the feelings and devotion of the one they love. The reader is hoping that the speaker will have all their questions answered. They will read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.