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Tingling Hooves  [13+]
Leaving Hoof Prints Around Ireland
by ♥OctOGRE tHiNg♥
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Review of Tingling Hooves  
Review by SpookyBee
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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*Reading* THE POEM

A lighthearted poem about hOOves visit to Ireland.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I loved the adventure hOOves went one from the the Dingle to Galway.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a poem that follows a limerick structure.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to make the font bigger and colorize it.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "I meandered over and over through the Emerald isle, carrying little else than a smile," I loved this visual. I can easily picture a cow taking their time and drinking in what the sights have to offer. There's a lighthearted vibe and I can't wait to see that hOOves finds.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening invites the reader in and keeps them reading. The title is a good fit for the poem. I was down for the adventure with hOOves! A fun little ditty.

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