A lighthearted poem about hOOves visit to Ireland.
WHAT I LIKED
I loved the adventure hOOves went one from the the Dingle to Galway.
STRUCTURE
This is a poem that follows a limerick structure.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to make the font bigger and colorize it.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "I meandered over and over through the Emerald isle, carrying little else than a smile," I loved this visual. I can easily picture a cow taking their time and drinking in what the sights have to offer. There's a lighthearted vibe and I can't wait to see that hOOves finds.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening invites the reader in and keeps them reading. The title is a good fit for the poem. I was down for the adventure with hOOves! A fun little ditty.
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