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 Touched By Love  [E]
Dedicated to the love of my life, my light on every stormy day.
by Ann Ticipation
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Happy Account Anniversary Ann Ticipation ,

This poem strikes with a wonderful expression of love for another and captures it with some unique imagery and also melancholy in the process. I was struck by these lines...

As if through rose-tinted glasses I see,
The sunshine behind drops of rain,
The greyest of skies still look blue to me...

Your offering here reads like a poem within a poem. You capture an image of radiance, colored and hiding behind tears, described as drops of rain. But even water is nourishing and it reminds me that rainbows can appears, serendipity, and other great symbols. It may be something picked up by a few readers.

It's also likely the speaker's delusion, but feels more like a coping mechanism for life. But more than that, a life lived and feeling blessed with love and nature intertwined as a theme, like a garden in Eden, utopian, where one can feel at peace, at ease. This gives a reader a sense of calm with appeal and something I'm sure many to all aspire to have.

Obviously dedicated to love, this poem has power to generate appreciation of hte written word that can be shared with another. As with the last line, I find you bring to light that even in our darkest moments, we take a fuller account of life, on the whole, and its scale tipping back to the balance. With that stable romance, life is wonderful, no matter, still beautiful. This was the highlight of the poem for me.

It's been a lot of years and a long time since the early days. Such a pleasure to again read and acknowledge your WDC Account Anniversary, now at twenty years.

Sincerely,

Brian
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