Hi closscie,


This is a fantastic piece. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the piece. Anyone interested in chemistry, or a similar discipline, will anxiously begin to read to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about the decomposition of plastic. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.