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 Once Upon a Time Open in new Window. [E]
A Story About Not a Thing Happening
by Twiga Author Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hi Twiga Author IconMail Icon;

I have the pleasure of reading and reviewing your "Once Upon A Time" piece. I found your piece when I pressed the read and review button at the side of the site. You get extra gift points this month if you do this. Curious if you are still writing with the site or on hiatus? I do hope you are still writing.

I was also curious if this was about a very depressed person who just can't manage a day.... or is it 'story' about not a thing really not happening. A sad tale really because the day sounded like a fabulous day and they missed it all. You do an nice job describing the details of the day.

Wishing you an awesome 2024 and hope you keep writing.


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