Hi YumNothingSoup,

This is a fantastic chapter. The chapter opens by mentioning that the stairs had no end. The reader is wondering if this is the way the staircase is or is this just the impression Tino has. They will read on to find out. This is a wonderful opening hook. The detail puts the reader all the way into the chapter. They get completely engrossed in how strange Kudzi is behaving. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The chapter is well paced. It moves fast enough to keep all the reader's attention, yet it moves slowly enough to allow the reader to easily follow what is going on in the chapter. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. Great job.