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| (4.5)   Greetings, Jacky! I am reviewing this because I am discovered it on Read & Review.  First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. The Positives/What I Liked I really enjoyed this. At first, I was just reading along, wondering where the story would go, and then I came to the Aha! moment, when it all came together! It's interesting how words can be misinterpreted, and especially by school kids trying to understand a word in a book they are reading, with such words as 'ajar' (misinterpreted as a jar) and 'figure' (misinterpreted as a numeral.) Nice work! Suggestions/Comments to ConsiderNothing really stood out, though there were just a few questionable punctuation placements I wondered about. Final ThoughtsWell-done! I really enjoyed this.  A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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