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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.


*Reading* THE POEM

A light spirited poem about a pumpkin who becomes a spooky face.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I loved how the story unfolded. The tone and mood is conversational and fun.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a poem with lines and the 2nd and 5th lines rythme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Gouged out his seedy innards," I loved the word choice "gouged" here. It's perfect for this time of the year.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening has a nice voice that keeps the reader reading wanting to find out what will happen to the pumpkin. The title is a nice fit for the poem. A perfect poem for the autumn season, harvest, and halloween!

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