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The Concern Open in new Window. [GC]
Intolerance at its worse between siblings. Adult material.
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Rated: GC | (5.0)
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Hi
Ironworker

This is a excellent short story about Daniel and Cryton. The way Daniel took care of Cryton permanently and how his influence effected the whole family has been beautifully captured by you in this short and exciting story. Not a moment went by while reading the story, I felt the tension, the mystery and the most important thing the excitement. A great job you have done in identifying the concern in so subtle a way. Great work..sindbad

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