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Greetings, Ned!

I’m here as a fellow member of the PPC5 project.

Your poem checks off all the boxes perfectly: a snapshot moment, nature imagery, and the correct syllable counts. I’m having lots of fun reading everyone’s creations for this assignment, and yours is great. We all know the cats watching birds outside the window, and it becomes relatable and amusing here. You even added a different angle with the pun in the title.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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