Hi bob county,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about a time when you saw a woman going to the beach at an unusual time. I am wondering if she will be alright in the storm. I read to the last word to find out. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.