Hi Storm,

This is a wonderful article. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the article. I am an avid user of social media and began to read immediately to find out more. You launch into the article without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the article. They will read to the last word. You have written about the impact of social media on mental health. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:


1)social media can have many different types of impact-"social" should begin with a capital letter.

You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.