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Given: Oct 6, 2024 at 12:21pm
Length: 645 Characters |
622 w/o WritingML
Well, this is a cute little piece, one I have to chuckle at. It is about praying before bed at night, to thank God for any goodness in the day, and to ask for a good one tomorrow. Sometimes that can be useful, as one wants to have hope for bright future. The question is; what will happen?
Thoughts
A cute piece to read today.
Spelling and Grammar
This poem might make more sense if "Pas" and "Past" were changed to "Pass", as in "Pass it on". Likewise, space between the sections might be helpful.
Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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