Hi QueenNormaJean,

This review comes with a huge thank you for reviewing my short story. This is a fantastic story. The tone is tinged with curiosity. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering how many strawberries Jamie and his mother will get. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a boy is my thoughtful by a story he is told by a talking rabbit. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. I love stories that give personalities to animals. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.