Dear theOCCowgirl

Thanks for sharing this poem. I like the flow of it, and it brings to mind the storm previously known as Hurricane Helene. There are several homesteading YouTubers that I follow that got swallowed up in the storms and rains and winds. Thankfully, they are all ok. I've gone through a hurricane myself, a couple of years ago, and I'm glad I'm not where I can be directly impacted.

I saw no grammar issues with your writing.

You give a vivid display of emotions and visual aspects that are correct.
I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Sincerely,



AmyJo