Hi Lou,

This is a wonderful poem. The tone is full of contentment. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. In the poem, you celebrate everything you love about your home. I am so happy that you enjoy your home so much. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.