Hi Juliet,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with joy and anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a couple who are completely involved with each other but ignore the reasons they shouldn't be together. I loved poems which tell stories. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.