Hi Strychnine,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of confusion and pain. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who can't control their jealousy. I am hoping that the speaker will find a way to deal with their jealousy and find a lasting love. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The poem has a unique rhyme that is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.