Hi ElytBlank,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of love and joy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a couple who want spend all their time together. I was taken by the love in this poem. I read to the last word to see what happens with this couple. I loved this poem. The poem has a unique rhyme that is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.