Hi ElytBlank, This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of fun and love. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a couple who spends a lot of their time together strolling through the woods. I think this sounds like a wonderful thing to do with the person you love. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a fantastic rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
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