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 Fast Cars and Fast Women Open in new Window. [E]
"Burning up the roadway...This gorgeous Southern cutie dives in, riding shotgun!" - a poem
by Tim Chiu Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Tim!

We meet again for another rollicking rhyming adventure via the Random Read and Review button.

This is hilarious. It reminds me of the type of story an old friend of mine would write: naive guy gets tricked by a clever pretty gal. You've put it into poetry in excellent fashion, giving us a tale which keeps us at the edge of our seats as we wonder what untoward thing might happen next.

Serves him right, for sure. I love how nothing nasty actually happened. You dealt with the subject humorously and tastefully, giving us a chuckle and a lesson on life.

Nothing to suggest here; I thoroughly enjoyed this one.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*



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