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Christmas in July Open in new Window. [E]
A poem reflecting on the idea of Christmas in July.
by Beholden Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Beholden!

So this was your entry to the contest which was the very first one I entered upon joining... How nice to encounter it on Random Read and Review.

You incorporated the prompt words well, creating a quietly amusing little poem with a nice rhyme and meter. I chuckled about the socks; most people would like something fancy for a gift, and it's the great complaint of many a kid (including my mom) "all I got was underwear!" I hope you had generous Christmas gifts over the years.

As usual, I can't think of anything to suggest... Perhaps a more transcendent theme would add depth, but it's hardly needed.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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