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Given: Oct 18, 2024 at 8:27pm
Length: 1,055 Characters |
1,049 w/o WritingML
Hi thesadbath,
This is a wonderful piece. The title is enigmatic and direct at the same time. The reader knows that they will be reading about how sad music makes you feel but not why that is. They will begin to read immediately to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about how listening to sad music makes you feel. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:
1)You have neglected to either double space or indent between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.
You use an emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.
You responded to this review 01/22/2025 @ 11:37pm EST
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